I worked hard on this! Please comment or like!

It is very good, and Leo and Zimbo as well, but one mistake: and every time h saw a star blink in the sky, it's not h it's he. But very nice story.

Great job! I really loved your story and your creative ideas. You’ve done a wonderful job! 👏

There are a few small mistakes, but don’t worry we’ll fix them together in class. Keep writing and keep up the amazing work!

A must read, beautifuly written. Honestly, this is REALLY GOOD!!!

Hello.

In this story, Leo the Lion meets someone that will change his life, and its life, forever.

Leo the Lion and Zimbo the Alien

In this story, Leo the Lion meets someone that will change his life, and its life, forever.