Leo the Lion and Zimbo the Alien

Great job! I really loved your story and your creative ideas. You’ve done a wonderful job! 👏 There are a few small mistakes, but don’t worry we’ll fix them together in class. Keep writing and keep up the amazing work!

It is very good, and Leo and Zimbo as well, but one mistake: and every time h saw a star blink in the sky, it's not h it's he. But very nice story.

I worked hard on this! Please comment or like!