I actually worked really hard on this. It’s my first time videoing so it was kinda hard for me to get it right.

Oh amazing! I also read alot of books, and finished the libary at school

Hello.

Nice! I also like the Ella diaries series!

In this story, Leo the Lion meets someone that will change his life, and its life, forever.

I worked hard on this! Please comment or like!

It is very good, and Leo and Zimbo as well, but one mistake: and every time h saw a star blink in the sky, it's not h it's he. But very nice story.

Great job! I really loved your story and your creative ideas. You’ve done a wonderful job! 👏

There are a few small mistakes, but don’t worry we’ll fix them together in class. Keep writing and keep up the amazing work!