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Jishitha Vivek
8 Years
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Birthday invite to cousin
Manha
11 days ago
It is lovely! But I have a few things to share. Firstly, if you are writing ‘I would just like to request’ you don’t need to add a ‘you’. Secondly, when you are writing ‘join me on my birthday party’ you need to replace the ‘on’ with ‘during’ (unless you are writing ‘join me on my birthday).
Siddhi Jain
9 days ago
Good
Thank you note to mom
Apology to friend