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Jishitha Vivek
9 Years
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Birthday invite to cousin
Manha Siddique
a year ago
It is lovely! But I have a few things to share. Firstly, if you are writing ‘I would just like to request’ you don’t need to add a ‘you’. Secondly, when you are writing ‘join me on my birthday party’ you need to replace the ‘on’ with ‘during’ (unless you are writing ‘join me on my birthday).
Siddhi Jain
a year ago
Good
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Thank you note to mom
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Whispering wind and roaring waves
Siddhi Jain
a year ago
Very good jishitha 👍🏻
