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Aditya Bose
12 Years
Shanghai Singapore International School
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Jahnvi Chandwaney
4 days ago
Great effort. I love the usage of "emphasis" in your voice.
Jahnvi Chandwaney
2 months ago
I am glad that you tried to incorporate the feedback shared—best of luck with your MUN speech at school.
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Jahnvi Chandwaney
2 months ago
Great job! I'm really happy to see you working on using emphasis and voice modulation. To make your presentation even more powerful, try adding facial expressions and let your emotions shine through your voice.
Jahnvi Chandwaney
2 months ago
Great points, Aditya. However, I would love to see the usage of voice modualtion and expressions
Jahnvi Chandwaney
4 months ago
Great job putting your thoughts in a mind map. Now, post a video presenting your speech on the topic.
Student Council Speech
Student Council is where a group of people gather and make decisions to improve the school experience based on the students’ thoughts and opinions. It is an organization to bring new things to school. Every year Councilors are elected by class. They can plan events throughout the year for students so their voices are heard.
Jahnvi Chandwaney
4 months ago
Aditya, your speech is very well written. Since you're addressing everyone for the student council election, it's important that you come across as both sincere and persuasive. Make sure to memorize your speech thoroughly so it flows smoothly and naturally.
Jahnvi Chandwaney
4 months ago
Since it's quite a long speech, try breaking it down into smaller sections to memorize bit by bit—or keep cue cards handy to guide you. We don’t want you fumbling to recall your lines in the moment. Also, bring some emotion into your voice to sound more authentic
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